Look at some of the responses from our writing workshop on July 12th.
Marvin Cole
"When I grow up I want to be a Software Developer. I want to go to school for Science and Technology and get a degree that is acceptable. I am grateful for my real parents. If I could help someone, I’d help my parents because I can help them when they are old. If I could be better at something it would be drawing."
Jovanni Hawkins
"When I grow up I want to be rich. If I could help someone, I’d help my mom because she is the reason I play football. If I could be better at something, it would be math."
Markael Cole
"When I grow up I want to be an actor. I want to go to school to be an actor. I am grateful for Marvin. If I could help someone, I’d help my best friend."
Mazariaye Dean
"When I grow up I want to be a judge. I want to go to school to be a judge. I am grateful for my mom and dad. If I can help someone, it will be my mom. If I can be better at something it will be reading."
Mekari Sanders
"When I grow up I want to be a football player. I want to go to school to play football. I am grateful for my mom and dad. If I can help someone, it would be my dad."
Jementae Johnson
"When I grow up I want to be a football player. I want to go to school to become a football player so I can be known by the world. I am grateful for my mom, dad, and MLK. If I can help someone, I would help my mom. Also, a homeless person, to make things easier for him. I can be better at following directions."
Rozell Hampton
"When I grow up I want to be a football player. I will go to LSU and learn, play on the team so NFL coaches can look and me and draft me. I am grateful for my family because I am close to everyone in my family. I need to work on paying attention because anything can take me out of my focus. "
Yuri Merchant
"When I grow up I want to be a dancer and nurse. I have to go to school to get my degree so I can become a nurse. I am grateful for my parents. I would help the homeless because I feel like they don’t have a home. I can be better at flipping."
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